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The school annual day was held last week, and it were a great success. The event began with the principal's speech, followed by various cultural performances by the students. Each student gives their best, and the audience was excited to see the performances. A dance performance by the 10th-grade students were particularly well-received, and many parents appreciated it. The chief guest of the event, a famous artist, praises the students for their talent and efforts. At the end, prizes were given to the students who had excelling in academics and sports. 



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The school annual day was held last week, and it was a great success. The event began with the principal's speech, followed by various cultural performances by the students. Each student gave their best, and the audience were excited to see the performances. A dance performance by the 10th-grade students was particularly well-received, and many parents appreciated it. The chief guest of the event, a famous artist, praised the students for their talent and efforts. At the end, prizes were given to the students who had excelled in academics and sports.

Location: Mogalturu, Andhra Pradesh, India

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