A 10th Grade Challenge in Editing 14.
A 10th Grade Challenge in Editing 14.
The following passage focuses on errors in subject-verb agreement, pronoun usage, and verb tense, making it an appropriate editing task for 10th-grade students.
Passage with Errors.
The science exhibition at our school were held last month. Many students participates enthusiastically, displaying their innovative projects. There was a variety of models showcasing the use of renewable energy, robots that perform different tasks, and even some biology experiments. The judges, who was experts in various fields, appreciated the creativity and effort put in by the students. My friend and me presented a project on solar energy, which were highly praised. The principal, along with the other staff members, congratulated the winners and encouraged all students to continue pursuing their interest in science.
Errors and Corrections.
The science exhibition at our school was held last month. Many students participated enthusiastically, displaying their innovative projects. There was a variety of models showcasing the use of renewable energy, robots that perform different tasks, and even some biology experiments. The judges, who were experts in various fields, appreciated the creativity and effort put in by the students. My friend and I presented a project on solar energy, which was highly praised. The principal, along with the other staff members, congratulated the winners and encouraged all students to continue pursuing their interests in science
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