A 10th Grade Challenge in Editing 16

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The following passage focuses on common errors such as subject-verb agreement, verb tense, and word choice, making it ideal for 10th-grade students to practice editing skills.


Passage with Errors. 


The school organized a field trip to the national park last week. All the students was excited as this was their first trip after a long time. The bus leaves early in the morning, and by the time we reached the park, everyone were tired but thrilled. Our guide explain the importance of protecting wildlife and the different types of animals found in the park. We seen many species of birds and animals during the trip. After lunch, we had a fun quiz, and the winners was given small gifts. Overall, it was an enjoyable and educational experience for all of us.


Errors and Corrections.



The school organized a field trip to the national park last week. All the students were excited as this was their first trip after a long time. The bus left early in the morning, and by the time we reached the park, everyone was tired but thrilled. Our guide explained the importance of protecting wildlife and the different types of animals found in the park. We saw many species of birds and animals during the trip. After lunch, we had a fun quiz, and the winners were given small gifts. Overall, it was an enjoyable and educational experience for all of us.

Location: Mogalturu, Andhra Pradesh, India

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