A 10th Grade Challenge on Editing 7
This passage involves more advanced errors such as verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and nuanced word usage, providing a higher level of difficulty for editing practice.
Passage with Errors:
The rapid urbanization we witnessing today have lead to a number of serious environmental issues, especially in developing countries. Air and water pollution is becoming increasingly common, and the lack of proper waste management systems are exacerbating the problem. Many cities has grown without adequate planning, resulting in overcrowded living conditions and insufficient public services. Additionally, deforestation for housing and infrastructure developments contribute to the loss of biodiversity, which in turn affect ecosystem stability. Governments must not only focus on economic growth but also prioritize sustainability by implementing stricter regulations and encourage green technologies. Failure to address these problems may result in irreversible damages to both human health and the planet.
The rapid urbanization we are witnessing today has led to a number of serious environmental issues, especially in developing countries. Air and water pollution are becoming increasingly common, and the lack of proper waste management systems is exacerbating the problem. Many cities have grown without adequate planning, resulting in overcrowded living conditions and insufficient public services. Additionally, deforestation for housing and infrastructure developments contributes to the loss of biodiversity, which in turn affects ecosystem stability. Governments must not only focus on economic growth but also prioritize sustainability by implementing stricter regulations and encouraging green technologies. Failure to address these problems may result in irreversible damage to both human health and the planet.
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